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Тема |
относно забележка от клиент |
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Автор |
Veshtica (новак) |
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Публикувано | 15.01.10 12:08 |
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Здравейте колеги,
става дума за следния текст. Кой от двата варианта е по-добър според вас и къде има грешки:
Вариант 1
Over 16 years we from УУУ continue our effort to improve the quality of the products offered to you and invest in the development of new items that you will find on the market.
Thank you all who prefer our products and invite you who don’t know them yet to convince yourselves that you can raise your profitability of your installation works by means of appropriate solutions for quick and qualitative installation and therefore also the quality of your product.
Вариант 2:
For more than 16 years, we, of УУУ, continuing efforts to improve the quality of our products and invest in the development of new products that you would find on the market.
Thanks to all who prefer products УУУ and invite those who do not yet know them, to see for yourself that through appropriate solutions for quick and quality installation can increase the profitability of their works, and with it the quality of your product
Редактирано от Veshtica на 15.01.10 12:27.
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